Well... advanced critique... right... you must know you did a serious mistake by setting that... i'm a criticism bitch...

For starting, i guess the main weird thing i can see about it it's the unproportional helm... i mean...it's absolutely huge compared to a normal head and the face portion is much smaller than it should be in relation to the whole head. The neck is also a bit too thick, but nothing as absurd as the head. If you take some time to fix the head and a bit of the neck the picture will gain a lot.

Going a bit further, i can see his right hand (the one on our left side) looks a bit odd too... i can't say why exactly; but it looks like its volume isn't quite right...some fingers are thicker than others and are being shown in a weird position. I think you should've drawn some guidelines for that... or even taken a look at your own hand on that pose through a mirror to get the right position.

The rest looks ok. I guess you tried to draw some effects on the armor that didn't come out quite well. I think you should leave those kind of effect to a possible coloring job to be done later or go ahead and make a fully shadowed/effected black and white pic, but not do the mid term.

Finalizeng, i think you kinda drew the armor without thinking of the body under it, so it passes a weird feeling at some points like the arm and the legs. I'd suggest you to draw the body under the armor with a really light lead and then draw the armor covering it. You will have much more control over the armor shapes and angles. That might be really helpful.

Well...that's it. I gotta congratulate you for pulling this out,cause it seems to have been a bit complicated to draw, and admit you did it quite well, you just can't stop trying to improve.

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^{He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche, Beyond Good and Evil}

Mistake? I have FORESEEN a comment like this when I set that, and I greatly appreciate it! Your critics are always useful and constructive, just what I need to improve on my drawings

I made a second attempt at that picture, trying to improve it as far as my skills allowed, and Advanced Critique is still encouraged. So feel free to let it out again

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“Sometimes I think the surest sign that intelligent life exists elsewhere in the universe is that none of it has tried to contact us.”

-Calvin and Hobbes

...= O

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Finally, the plans for my ultra-violent-destructo-type-thingy are COMPLETE!!! Now to build it. Tralalalala! *Skips off*

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Thanks for the favourite

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“Sometimes I think the surest sign that intelligent life exists elsewhere in the universe is that none of it has tried to contact us.”

-Calvin and Hobbes

MOO! 'tis very BOOTIFUL. I shall fave it for your effort.

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Sir, this toast is burnt.

Thank you ^^

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“Sometimes I think the surest sign that intelligent life exists elsewhere in the universe is that none of it has tried to contact us.”

-Calvin and Hobbes

Wow... it ended... in a very cool way . GREAT! (you should make a new deviation every time you add something, or wait until you have it finished)

Well, I guess its finished now Next time, I'll probably make new deviations for every new versions. Glad you like it ^^

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“Sometimes I think the surest sign that intelligent life exists elsewhere in the universe is that none of it has tried to contact us.”

-Calvin and Hobbes

Really cool!